Your drawing is VERY good. The only advice I have is for the dialogue: "Oh. Shut up! They already talk!" You don't need "are". The drawing....FABULOUS! Just a titch of advice. "Dialog tidak perlu "are". Aku mencoba Google Translate karena bekerja sangat baik atas tanggapan Anda." Just trying
Ahh... I'm sorry I messed up with the translation... ;A; I'll try to fix it as soon as possible! Thank you very much~ Sorry for making you used google translate...
I'll try to fix it as soon as possible! Thank you very much~
Sorry for making you used google translate...
You're the first to comment this draw~
Thank you so much~
I love the style that they are drawn in :3